The Breakup

What a great reading; engaging, confessional and focused. I wanted to know more, but this was a great excerpt.

I like stories that I can relate to. This brought me right into the moment. I reminded me of the first girl I was in love with when I was 22, how it went sideways, and how I suffered emotionally and physically like you described.. To me this is great description about the early detox from a person. Nice work.

The postmodern relationship - a mix of technology, intermediaries, doubt and loneliness. The emotional honesty is intense. I'd like to hear a Part II that answers the "What do I do know?" question. Really well read!

Your reading style is great - ample emotion but not too over the top in your delivery. Obviously a passionate subject for you. We can all relate in one way or another, I think. Thanks for writing and sharing.