This is the 2nd draft of my very first piece of Erotic type poetry, I am looking for whatever feedback I can get to help me make it a better piece. Thx, for listening!
I think this poem has a unique approach with rhythm. Most erotic poetry is slow and sensual. This has more of a rap rhythm to it, but the words are sensual in themselves. I like that.
Published June 16th, 2008 by krstntate






