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This is the 2nd draft of my very first piece of Erotic type poetry, I am looking for whatever feedback I can get to help me make it a better piece. Thx, for listening!

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Author: Revolutionary_Mutt
Time: 1:17
Plays: 81
Reactions: 2
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Logan Shorey
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2008
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All tags: Erotic | erotica | love | Lust | poetry | Primal | sex |

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serving as an essential ...

serving as an essential component; "a cardinal rule"; "the central cause of the problem"; "an example that was fundamental to the argument"; "computers are fundamental to modern industrial structure"
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Published February 8th, 2010 by william583
I think this poem has a ...

I think this poem has a unique approach with rhythm. Most erotic poetry is slow and sensual. This has more of a rap rhythm to it, but the words are sensual in themselves. I like that.

Published June 16th, 2008 by krstntate